It was a lovely day at Sotilius´ world. I woke up at house and I wise up that it was Sunday, I had breakfast normally, as I do every weekend, everything was going as usual, normally, so I deceided to start doing my homewroks.When I was doing my homeworks, the telephone rang, nobody was at home so I stand up and pick up the phone. It wa Roberto, my firned, phoning.
I talk a bit with him and he told me that he had discovered a cave near the forest, and he wanted to explore it, so we decided to explore together. We ride our bikes to the forest, and soon we saw the cave, we were really frightened beacuse it was really dark and the forest was too lonely. Next, we deceided to enter. We didn´t see anything, so we take out our lanterns. We saw a lot of rocks and in the corner we saw many bags with the dollar sign ($) so we thaught that the thieves used the cave to hide the money they thief. Roberto told me to open the bag, I did, and there were a lot of coins. Suddenly, we herd a noise coming out the cave, three men was coming and they will find us, we put behind a rock and we stayed quietly.
Roberto was in the way to phone the police when he made a noise, the thieve heard it and they came, it was really annoying and they saw us... we were very chicken and the thieves were coming, I stand up and put my hands up beacuse I don´t want to be death, I closed my eyes, I didn´t want to see what happened and then... It happened... The thieves said "WELCOME TO MTV CAZADOS" I was lost. Roberto was laughing and the thieves too. They turn up the lights of the cave, there were a lot of cameras and they were recording me... Roberto made me an awful joke, but, when it appeared at TV I lagh a lot.
I am planning an interesting joke to my friend Roberto... hehehehehe
The narrative has a clear beginning, middle and end 1
ResponderEliminarEach paragraph expresses a main idea 1
Use of different past tenses 1
Use of time expressions to sequence events 2
Use of a variety of language 3
No grammar, spelling or punctuation mistakes 1
9 out of 18
Mark: 5
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