miércoles, 21 de mayo de 2014

FAST FOOD IS BAD FOR US

Nowadays, many people consider that fast food can be harmful for us and they think that we should ban it. Others think that it can be harmful, but not necessary. Nevertheless, there are strong arguments for and against the idea.

It is clear that fast food is not as healthy for us as a vegetable dish. For example, Mc Donald´s or Burger King´s meat usually comes from animals with diseases, and not always are cow meats. Furthermore, they have to make excellent advertising campaigns, and promoting their hamburgers with names like “Happy meal” or things like that. In addition to this, experts think that they can cause death.

On the other hand, it can also be argued that with our lifestyle, and more in our society, we have no time for cooking healthy meals and worked dishes, so, we use Mc Donald’s  as a “workable” restaurant. Another argument for this is that their food is really tasty, and they have a long variety of hamburgers.

In conclusion, as I agree that fast food is not the best we can eat I think that people ought to be able to choose the kind of diet they want for themselves. I end up reminding that we are free to eat whatever we want.

1 comentario:

  1. it can be harmful, but not necessary.
    cow meats.
    meat usually comes from animals with diseases: Are you sure?
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