Nowadays, many people consider that fast food
can be harmful for us and they think that we should ban it. Others think that
it can be harmful, but not necessary. Nevertheless, there are strong arguments
for and against the idea.
It is clear that fast food is not as healthy
for us as a vegetable dish. For example, Mc Donald´s or Burger King´s meat
usually comes from animals with diseases, and not always are cow meats. Furthermore,
they have to make excellent advertising campaigns, and promoting their hamburgers
with names like “Happy meal” or things like that. In addition to this, experts
think that they can cause death.
On the other hand, it can also be argued that
with our lifestyle, and more in our society, we have no time for cooking
healthy meals and worked dishes, so, we use Mc Donald’s as a “workable” restaurant. Another argument
for this is that their food is really tasty, and they have a long variety of
hamburgers.
In conclusion, as I agree that fast food is not
the best we can eat I think that people ought to be able to choose the kind of
diet they want for themselves. I end up reminding that we are free to eat whatever
we want.
it can be harmful, but not necessary.
ResponderEliminarcow meats.
meat usually comes from animals with diseases: Are you sure?
have to make ..., and promoting --- have to make ..., and promote
can eat I think that --- Punctuation
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