Nowadays, and with the new technology that has
appeared in the last decade, online shopping has become fashionable as one of
the best ways to buy things. Some people argue that it is better than
traditional shopping. However, I totally disagree.
In my opinion, online shopping is much easier
than high street shopping and also more comfortable, but, where is the spirit
of a traditional consumer that wakes up on Saturday morning and goes to the
high street to window-shop? It is a bit disgusting that we spend our lives in
front of computer, and always with an excuse to stay with it.
Furthermore, I personally find nasty the reliability
of online shopping. For example, sometimes you buy something on EBay or a
shopping page like it and it never comes.
To sum up, I strongly prefer traditional
shopping than online shopping if it´s not necessary because I believe that the
soul of high street shopping on nonworking days will never die.
Linkers: but
ResponderEliminardisgusting ---- sad, it is a pity / a shame
it never comes.
the reliability of online shopping --- you may experience problems with online shopping
it never comes --- it bever arrives
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